08/20/2008
from the Kennebec Journal
Finding shelter for those who serve their nation
Immigrant recalls her special greeting
State gains $85M in Homeland Security funds
Man arrested after swerve toward cop
School unit in limbo
Rain? What rain?
LEE LATCHES ON WITH THOMAS
Modern camping equipment takes it to the extreme
All of today's:
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from the Morning Sentinel
Civil War-era flag finds honored position
Residents wonder if the rain will ever go away
FAIRFIELD Sewage plant rejection irks man
Winslow's fireworks guy doesn't mind the obscurity
At holiday derby, the fun is catching
Vets' champion 'very passionate' about her work
Hersom deals with change
Sandals work for outdoor types
All of today's:
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from the Morning Sentinel
For example: "Enoch Petrucelly this week was appointed a defense attorney, Howard F. O'Brien, but he requested that O'Brien be dumped so he can find new representation."
"I do wish to have a lawyer of my own choosing," Petrucelly said, adding that he has two lawyers in mind but he needs financial assistance and further research to find them.
The reporter stating this young man wanted his lawyer "dumped" is not professional reporting. It would have been more appropriate to say that he wanted his lawyer replaced, rather than dumped. Read the quote that followed the sentence. The young man did not use the words "dumped," however, your reporter did. The article appears to be written by a ninth- or 10th- grader in high school.
I read both Bangor Daily News and the Morning Sentinel, and the Bangor Daily News reads much better, is more professional and does not seem to have the typos/grammatical errors that the Morning Sentinel does.
I do not know who is doing your proofreading, but do encourage you to start checking the facts and the actual story itself for errors. This does not reflect well on your paper.
Melissa Richards
Hartland




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