08/20/2008
from the Kennebec Journal
Sport of Kings
New Medicaid billing system inspires doubts among some
Christmas spirit
Guidance counselor: Dismiss complaint based on criticism of same-sex marriage
CHELSEA: 'Practice burn' provides thrill for 9-year-old
Trust eyes orchard purchase
GOLFER OF THE YEAR: Bonenfant rises up Cony ranks
YOUTH SOCCER: Local team gives 'care package' to children in Afghanistan
All of today's:
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from the Kennebec Journal
from the Morning Sentinel
YES ON 1 BACKER REBUTS CLAIM
New system for Medicaid payments worries providers
After petition drive, Clinton police force budget will go a third time before voters
A rock musician makes trip home via Black Taxi
MADISON: After revaluation, abatement requests reviewed
Parks to have facelift
GOLFER OF THE YEAR: Sweet does job for Madison
YOUTH SOCCER: Local team gives 'care package' to children in Afghanistan
All of today's:
News | Sports
from the Morning Sentinel
For example: "Enoch Petrucelly this week was appointed a defense attorney, Howard F. O'Brien, but he requested that O'Brien be dumped so he can find new representation."
"I do wish to have a lawyer of my own choosing," Petrucelly said, adding that he has two lawyers in mind but he needs financial assistance and further research to find them.
The reporter stating this young man wanted his lawyer "dumped" is not professional reporting. It would have been more appropriate to say that he wanted his lawyer replaced, rather than dumped. Read the quote that followed the sentence. The young man did not use the words "dumped," however, your reporter did. The article appears to be written by a ninth- or 10th- grader in high school.
I read both Bangor Daily News and the Morning Sentinel, and the Bangor Daily News reads much better, is more professional and does not seem to have the typos/grammatical errors that the Morning Sentinel does.
I do not know who is doing your proofreading, but do encourage you to start checking the facts and the actual story itself for errors. This does not reflect well on your paper.
Melissa Richards
Hartland




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