08/20/2008
from the Kennebec Journal
QUESTIONS REMAIN
No complaints from those who switched to Somerset County center
Vote on 1 may hurt some in election
Steeple at center of debate in Whitefield
VETERANS REQUIRE ASSISTANCE: Homelessness takes center stage
J.P. DEVINE: Overcome sadness with hope
BASKETBALL: NBA Hall of Famer Barry doles out advice at Thomas College
HIGH SCHOOL CROSS COUNTRY: Maranacook sophomore Mace dominates Class B field
All of today's:
News | Sports
from the Kennebec Journal
from the Morning Sentinel
A year later, families await answers on fatalities
Owner of topless coffee shop on the comeback trail
Officials report cheaper, better service after switch
Two people in critical condition
Young Marines stick to program
Issue of homeless veterans at center stage
GIRLS SOCCER STATE CHAMPIONSHIP: Winslow falls to York in Class B
Bard hits her marathon stride
All of today's:
News | Sports
from the Morning Sentinel
For example: "Enoch Petrucelly this week was appointed a defense attorney, Howard F. O'Brien, but he requested that O'Brien be dumped so he can find new representation."
"I do wish to have a lawyer of my own choosing," Petrucelly said, adding that he has two lawyers in mind but he needs financial assistance and further research to find them.
The reporter stating this young man wanted his lawyer "dumped" is not professional reporting. It would have been more appropriate to say that he wanted his lawyer replaced, rather than dumped. Read the quote that followed the sentence. The young man did not use the words "dumped," however, your reporter did. The article appears to be written by a ninth- or 10th- grader in high school.
I read both Bangor Daily News and the Morning Sentinel, and the Bangor Daily News reads much better, is more professional and does not seem to have the typos/grammatical errors that the Morning Sentinel does.
I do not know who is doing your proofreading, but do encourage you to start checking the facts and the actual story itself for errors. This does not reflect well on your paper.
Melissa Richards
Hartland




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